Choose this service to get the most detailed feedback on the main elements of story (plot, character, voice, pacing, etc.). The developmental edit is a critical step in the writing process and offers clear direction for revision. This service includes substantial comments, questions, and suggestions.  

• I review your work and provide actionable feedback in a detailed editorial letter.

• I provide comments and occasional line edits (to demonstrate an idea) directly in the manuscript.

• We can follow up with a phone call (up to 1 hour) or 3 email exchanges.

• Copy edits ARE NOT provided in this early stage of editing.

Choose this service if you want a less detailed developmental edit. A manuscript assessment offers feedback on the same big picture elements provided in a full developmental edit, but without supporting comments in the manuscript and does not include follow-up exchanges by email or phone.

• I review your work and provide an editorial letter with actionable feedback on the major narrative and structural elements.

• This edit does NOT include line or margin comments.

• Copy edits ARE NOT provided in this early stage of editing.

Choose a copy edit if you want help cleaning up the final draft of a project. Think of this service as the last stop before sending your work into the world.

• I edit for readability, clarity, and consistency.

• I fix mistakes related to spelling, grammar, and mechanics.

• I check for a consistent voice, tone, and style.

• Manuscript assessment and developmental edit feedback ARE NOT included.

Please contact me to provide a brief description of your project, including word count, genre, plot, and draft version. I will respond within 48 hours with more information. Thanks!